In spite of many advance women have made in education and employment they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion In your view what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r superiors consider paying or offering a promote higher positions. In my opinion, there ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Born
...stries such as biomedical and chemical. born. Therefore, to improve gender equality ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
... health, and violence against violence. family. The effective operation of this associ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1417, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...en also work 8 hours a day like a herd. therefore, after finishing the job, they also nee...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, even so, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71630500026 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558695652174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9795284876 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.277777778 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268208881989 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081494262648 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366761085896 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159841262197 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492331525849 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r superiors consider paying or offering a promote higher positions. In my opinion, there ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Born
...stries such as biomedical and chemical. born. Therefore, to improve gender equality ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
... health, and violence against violence. family. The effective operation of this associ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1417, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...en also work 8 hours a day like a herd. therefore, after finishing the job, they also nee...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, even so, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71630500026 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558695652174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9795284876 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.277777778 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268208881989 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081494262648 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366761085896 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159841262197 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492331525849 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.