Nowadays, Editors decide what kind of news should be shown on televisions and what kind of news should be printed in newspapers and magazines. its unimportant for them what sort of news, bad or good, they wish to make sensation even from bad news. Due to there are a lot of bad news which become more popular and they have impact on people. However, good news may bring peace and happiness of a society.
In the present days, news sources like TV, newspapers and radio play very important role in our society. These sources give us information about the world. First of all, it is noticeable that you can see all types of information on tv or newspaper, like help to indigent people,it is a good news. But you can not decide what sort of news you want on your morning routine and binding of newspapers ,it is decide by the news editors. they will choose which news to show. Editors need your attention so they publish the most interesting such as death of someone or flood somewhere. their main idea is "money". Many news editors show us unnecessary information,such as crime also like the 2 man freeze approximately 300 children to sell their heart and lungs. It is badly influenced to children and their parents.In addition also good news has the big effect on people.
Secondly, it would be a lot more productivity for the nation if they are informed of good news such as improvements in health or scientific matters or any new invention on top of getting the truth about critical global or local matters equally. I would not agree with the notion that we are used to the bad news as I have witnessed many cases when a good news gets more attention and audience than bad news. Often peoples attention can be achieved by publishing and broadcasting bad and negative news, but this is now always the truth as events like a peace treaty, good deeds and political positive decision get more viewers than bad news.
To sum up, obviously, The main idea of news editors is only gain money and their position in business, they are inspired by several factors to make a decision about news report, it can be argued that good news is more important than bad news, therefore, news editors should broadcast and print good news, which can bring many benefits to the human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66253101737 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59874356103 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508684863524 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4445234073 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46859744668 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153128883359 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10624039429 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319204220922 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645621812951 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.