Raising up a child is a full time job and requires one to be equipped with the right skills and knowledge. It is believed by some people that newly mothers and fathers should enter parental classes in order to raise their young ones well. I agree with this idea as will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, most parents are naive and lack the know how of raising children. Some of these people get pregnant without planning how they will raise the child. Thus, having a course that educates on the fundamentals of upbringing children is ideal. For example, a course called Parenting 101, is available in Botswana at an affordable rate to all. It teaches on the child's milestones and the role of parents in helping their child reach and pass them.
Additionally, custodians also benefit from these classes as they can have a strong support system. Many newly parents lack a support from their loved ones due to life circumstance, this course allows them to learn from other mothers and experts who teach them and help them cope with the challenges of raising a child. For instance, a research by People's magazine showed that many mothers who lack a strong support systems can end up developing maternal depression. therefore parenting classes can help reduce such cases through the support they provide.
To conclude, parenting is a lifelong task and new parents should attend it to attain the skill and knowledge, as well as the support from other participants.
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this topic? 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- New parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...parents lack a support from their loved ones due to life circumstance, this course a...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'system'?
Suggestion: system
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.888 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53266657892 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1065868115 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24387802497 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881911372531 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684702900882 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165529744931 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646867199824 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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