New parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The crucial issue about good parenting has been raised owing to the rapid increase of disruptive parent-child relationship. In this light, some people vehemently claim that beginner parent should participate in a parenting course in order to adapt substantial values that are relevant in upbringing a child well. Notwithstanding, this writer extremely disagrees because such courses are ineffective and unrealistic in this contemporary era.
To begin with, proponents of having a parenting course often point out the in- depth learnings of parenting styles gained. This is because parenting groups are equipped with appropriate or significant learnings which are the key to being good parents, thereby producing good children in the end. However, it is far from reality to warrant this better outcome as there are various extrinsic factors to consider such as availability of parents, the cost of parenting course and the socio- cultural environment of a child as well. To exemplify, new parents in the USA prefer to seek immediate help from their parents, and even so, grandparents are the ones looking after their grandchildren.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that parenting is a growing experience that is transmitted from parents to children. It is often acquired through the nurturing habits and tender- loving attitudes of parents to their children which are the fundamental basis to know if its right or wrong. If a child was brought up by well- oriented or faithful family, then it would naturally reflect his/her future family as well. Apart from this, effective parenting styles are prominent on the Internet with just a few clicks, resultantly saving time and effort compared to the must attendance in a parental subject.
Indeed, attending a parenting course is insufficient to raise well- behaved and well-mannered children in a society. Hence, parental instinct is natural and due to the advancements in modern technology, tips on how to properly guide and nurture a child is possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, then, well, apart from, even so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31661442006 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.976485314 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8695723179 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.461538462 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369099704069 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135301356103 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540332028292 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230180443592 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151825923815 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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