In this era of modernization, technology has provided various technological gadgets as well as achieved many milestones. It is very beneficial in every field.
"As every dark cloud has a silver lining"
There are numerous benefits of spending leisure time with technology. Primarily, children can enhance their knowlege by getting an extra coaching from tutors. Moreover, they can learn the qualities of time-management as well as dedication by playing video games on technology. Apart from it, they can make new friends in various ways of technology such as, on Instagram, facebook and twitter. furthermore, they can update themselves with new current affairs.Therefore, these are the benefits of technology.
On the other hand," every coin has two sides."
One side is very essential and second side can not be ignored.There are plethora of disadvantages of using technology.Initially, children can suffer from fatel diseases such as, obesity, insomania. Sometimes, they join peer groups with the help of technology system. Nowadays, It is the matter of grave concern for their parents. Technology also puts bad impact on their studies.such as, they can not concenterate. Therefore, these are the problems creted by technology.
In the epilogue, technology plays crucial role in children,s life.It is extremely useful for them. However, it is the good source of gaining knowledge.
- in some countries young people move into their own home in their early twenties.In other countries,young people stay with your parents until their thirties.Why is this happening?what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations 73
- Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 56
- The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.Summarize the information. 56
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63849765258 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38762894784 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2333596679 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181285978339 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562484622876 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384808562533 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714224760267 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554580894279 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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