News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in
newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we
become used to bad news? Would it be better more good news was
reported?
News is a medium by which public get to know about what is happening in and around the surrounding and world. It is medium by which people can be given information of various things such as landslides weather changes and much more.
This News companies have a news editor. These people decide what to show to the people that’s on television and what to print in the newspapers. There can be many factors that can influence the decision of the news editors. The editors may have been instructed by the head of that company that the news should be such that it should spread like fire in the forest in the public due to this the editors may add some extra or unnecessary adjective and adverbs which may create a very big issues in the public. The head of company can also tell that to show the news as it is which influences the editor and thus a proper news may be given to public.
Many of the news companies propagate news to increase there TRP so that they become more popular in public and in turn earn more revenue and profits. Many news editors project some news in bad tone or manner. This is done by the news editors to gain more profit. This creates bad or negative influence on people. This may in turn result in negative thought process in the minds of people. As a result, many people get easily attracted to the negative or the bad things that happen around them.
It would be best if more good news was reported. This creates good or positive influence on people. This may in turn result in positive thought process in the minds of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es bad or negative influence on people. This may in turn result in negative thought ...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...ings that happen around them. It would be best if more good news was reported. This cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4425087108 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24252776729 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425087108014 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6099394301 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343123594194 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135274143495 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930968646732 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200294718535 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658243693741 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.