News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
Today’s world is highly influenced by media such as television, newspapers and other forms as well. It is known that the realm of media, specifically news channels and newspapers, the decision of whatever is to be broadcasted to the public is in the dominion of an editor. In this essay the factors which influence whether to choose good news or bad news will be discussed. Nevertheless, I believe a balance between favorable and unfavorable kinds of news are necessary, and both these views will be elaborated.
As far as I am concerned, there are wide range of factors in regarding to publishing news and broadcasts. The most noticeable, I believe, is that aiming at a high immense of audience rating in order to maximize profits. Additionally, the selection of materials should be done with utmost vigilance, including the political and socio-economic circumstances to avoid sending any misleading information to the audience by the corruption of the system. Nonetheless, the authenticity of media has been effected and controlled entirely by powerful political parties due to various reasons such as need of favor, bribe or grant of access etc.
Subsequently, to entice the audience, negative information often receives more priority than positive ones as any kind of adverse occurrence is more gripping than regular events. However, it is important to realize that subjecting the masses to such bleak happenings daily has a damaging effect on the psyche of the population. On the other hand, I disagree with more good news to be reported, for the simple reason that people likely would not consume those reports. Thus, it is important to strike a balance between good and bad news in order to keep the feelings of hope and motivation alive among the people.
In conclusion, print and electronic media, should emphasize more on empowering, educating, and entertaining the communities. In my opinion, I think news should be a perfect blend of good and bad, so that we can have awareness on what is happening in the world. Moreover, I would like to say that although there are various factors in play when choosing what to report to the audience, the nature of the facts and figures showcased through news media should maintain an equilibrium to avoid demoralizing and demotivating influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1299734748 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0207555249 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5574913414 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321356175537 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961606639336 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840419338895 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178488750981 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915496478021 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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