The news media have become too much influence in people lives today and this is a negative development. To what exent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that the appearance of social media tends to be a negative impact on people’s lifestyle. While I agree with this point of view, I do not believe that mass media only brings us disadvantages.
To begin with, there are some evidences illustrating the drawbacks of news media. On the first level of influence, it will be a deadly weapon since there are numerous fake news which will directly affect to private life of people, especially celebraties. For example, some singers in Korean are depression because of the pressure of media and dangerously, some of them choose the death. Secondly, some media contents are not suitable for children such as violence or prostitution and influence easily in children’s think and behaviour. Therefore, children’s access to such content can be difficult should be limited.
However, the aforementioned reasons can be seen as oposite angle. Firstly, news media keep people not to be out-of-date. Due to the development of medias, people can easily access to the world at home such as current affairs, weather forecast… so distance is not a barrier. The second benefit is great in promoting mass consumer products because of the increase in advertisements in television and radio. As a result, this can in turn acceleration sales of the product.
In conclusion, the development of news media has both beneficial and detrimental effects in people’s life.
- The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month (in millimetres). 73
- The graph below shows the amounts spent on apparel on the Internet in the USA and Japan between 1999 and 2003 81
- The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995 81
- The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001 2004 Identify the main trends and summarize the data 66
- Some people believe that history has little to tell us. Other people believe that people must have knowledge of history in order to understand the present. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27826086957 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17677060166 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4986828003 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162595993375 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608137945149 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514521722785 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112230032135 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442069548765 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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