It is widely believed that in the modern world, the newspapers are being undervalued due to the dominance of Internet-based and online media. While I am convinced with this reality, I think there are still rooms for the traditional press in this technological era.
Thanks to the availability of Internet connection, the increasing number of people have the exposure to numerous websites which provide news with several associated benefits. It is true that information transition of internet is no doubt much faster than that of the paper-made news. In this way, all
individuals could be well-informed of national and international current events at a click of a button. Also, the ubiquity of smartphones has raised the possibility of flexible news acquisition. With the movement towards utilizing cyber space to spread information, it would help save considerable expenses for newspapers as well as protect the environment. Many broadsheets now offer the online version which could be accessed without any fees. In long term, it will prevent the large amount of trees from being cut down for producing newspapers and limit the waste of old already-read ones sent to landfill.
However, paper-made news is likely to be preferred over the modern media in terms of reliability. Despite the great convenience, online news is sometimes regarded as inaccurate sources of information. Whereas the reports written in printed bulletins are compiled by experienced and impartial journalists, so readers could be assured that they are absorbing the actual facts. Another factor is that older population who tend to find it hard to adapt to technological advances will remain using newspapers as the main source of information. The continuous developments in this fields appear to complicate the method of searching for news. For example, some online newspapers require users to register before entering the websites and many other procedures. Therefore, a number of people still have the favor for mainstream media rather than learn those to use the alternative media.
Inclusion, the popularity of Internet-based news is undeniably becoming the regular source of information, but the traditional newspapers still play a vital part in this field.
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars Give reasons 73
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 76
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 362, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'facts'.
Suggestion: facts
... be assured that they are absorbing the actual facts. Another factor is that older populatio...
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Line 6, column 571, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rmation. The continuous developments in this fields appear to complicate the method ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42285714286 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09870809157 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597142857143 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1110300982 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119830629252 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039233795184 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276240631566 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737858898035 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236151225459 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.