Nowadays, Newspapers are publishing gossips about celebrities bacause by publishing them their sales will increase. Paper, which contains news, publishing the personal life information of celebrities. Hence few people say that administration have to maintain same laws to limit the boundaries of media whereas other inhabitants feel it is not an issue. In my opinion, Government have to control these publishers because it is against the freedom to live
On the one hand, some people, the newspapers are crossing the limits in order to increase the sales. Although there are many issues, which are severe, in society, they publish about personal life. In order to control these media, government must take an action on illegal printers. If beurocrats take an action on this, media will stop to print articles. To illustrate, In 2010, Eenadu, which is the famous newspaper in andra pradesh printed an article about pavan kalyan's, who is the famous star, marriage. At that time government took an action against the publisher. Hence the newspapers didn't try to publish such things. If government follow strict rules to control, It can stop the reporter to don't write such articles on celebrities personal matters.
On the other hand, other people, government has no need to react on this things because celebrities have a lot of responsibilities of society so that they should be in polite manner. News articles are being published but celebies need to maintai caln. When stars stay in a polite manner, nedia also will write in a same kind. For an example, Rajesh, who is an famous actor, had cheated many girls with using his stardom. At that time, media focused in a good way. Hence he was arrested. Every one have to do their work ten society will success.
To conclude, I believe that If government take an action on newspapers which are printing celebrities personal matters severly, media don't publish these things. Similarly, some think that aministration should maintain strict rules while others say that no need to take any action becauae sometimes celebies cheat girls, at that time, media plays a major role
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10601719198 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126647021 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550143266476 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2512200814 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195859462182 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557063702588 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487190727118 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13246057775 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674906716455 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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