Nowadays, Eating food is an entertainment to many people because they enjoy to eat. In few nations health issues are increasing due to over eating of junk food. Hence administration have to take seviour action on this variety of food. I believe that government should made restrictions in order to control the less quality food. However, even if goverment take the actions,people also have to take measures
On one hand, because of eating junk food, most of the people are suffered. In order to decrease this proportion, administration must come forward to take sevior actions such as high taxexes. For instance packets like kurkure are harmful to eat is that to prevent it, Modi government took action against it and banned the product. In addition, the food in fast food centers are low quality, which has no any vitamins. Low quality food is the main reason to lead the disease across the country as it contains the vulnarable jerms. Although people bilieve that it doesn't contain any harm to people, it is the main reason. To illustrate, In 201 survey 80% of deseases are caused because of less quality food in the fast food centers. Hence administration need to take the action on fast food
On the other hand, Even if government take the action, it doesn't work completly because the people have to take some measures. Firstly, inhabitants must avoid the junk items to eat. If they avoid by themself, it will be 100% succes rather than the official action on the fast food. For example after inhabitants had known the fact that chinese products were low quality products, many people didn't want to buy those products as a result the chinese products declined over the period. Therefore self action is necessary to prevent the quality less food in order to decrease the diseases
In conclucion, I believe that the government must take an action where as people also an initiative to tackle the junk food to prevent diseases. Government should make a law on junk food because it stops the less quality food. However individuals have to take as their responsibility in order to eradicate the diseses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy eating'.
Suggestion: enjoy eating
...tertainment to many people because they enjoy to eat. In few nations health issues are incre...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...eople because they enjoy to eat. In few nations health issues are increasing due to ove...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...easing due to over eating of junk food. Hence administration have to take seviour act...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ever, even if goverment take the actions,people also have to take measures On one ha...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...food centers are low quality, which has no any vitamins. Low quality food is the m...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... jerms. Although people bilieve that it doesnt contain any harm to people, it is the m...
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... quality food in the fast food centers. Hence administration need to take the action ...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Even if government take the action, it doesnt work completly because the people have ...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... were low quality products, many people didnt want to buy those products as a result ...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nese products declined over the period. Therefore self action is necessary to prevent the...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...that the government must take an action where as people also an initiative to tackle the...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...because it stops the less quality food. However individuals have to take as their respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88022284123 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63074484308 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481894150418 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8619080716 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252019231578 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913160040077 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505689870947 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17665879312 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311904233409 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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