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Travelling is leisure activity which is mostly pursue by the elite class of people in our pursue Society. As number of People travel internationally the price of tour packages is decline. In this essay, I shall discuss pros and cons of this practice for different countries.
To begin with, there are many benefits of for host Country who invite the tourist. Firstly, traveling Costs is decreasing nowadays, so, more are more number of people visit different places. Therefore, local people get the more job opportunity. Travelling industry is backbone of developing country's economy. Secondly, if people of two countries are visiting, then,
the relation between this countries would get closer. So that, both country share their culture with each other. For example, USA and Canada have a good relationship because of tourism. If country's economies is depended on one another, there would a less chance of armed conflict.
On the flip side, a sum of tourist brings some negative effect on locals and environment. Firstly,tourist would throw the garbage in popular spots. More number of tourist need more resources like water ,food and so on. For instance , in shimla which is very popular hill station in India, there is shortage of water after 2010 because of tourism. Lastly, unintentionally, tourist may disrespect the local culture and local get offended for this behaviour.
To recapitulate, although , both country would benefits from exchanging tourist but, there are some environmental problem occur. Tourist need to learn about local culture before travelling. So that, they respect their traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pursued'.
Suggestion: pursued
...ing is leisure activity which is mostly pursue by the elite class of people in our pur...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... class of people in our pursue Society. As number of People travel internationally...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e visiting, then, the relation between this countries would get closer. So that, bo...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tourist
...ffect on locals and environment. Firstly,tourist would throw the garbage in popular spot...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f tourist need more resources like water ,food and so on. For instance , in shimla...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...like water ,food and so on. For instance , in shimla which is very popular hill st...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is behaviour. To recapitulate, although , both country would benefits from exchan...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...pitulate, although , both country would benefits from exchanging tourist but, there are ...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...urist but, there are some environmental problem occur. Tourist need to learn about loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35433070866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8144090743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0768348367 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5789473684 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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