Socializing online is becoming popular among people whereas, traditional way of socialization has become less attractive. In my opinion, this is a negative development as socialization online cause dissatisfaction in relationships, lead to isolation and create other problems in life rather than advantages.
There are multifarious negative effect of social networking sites. The first and foremost negative point is considered that due to the online socialization, people less interact physically with her known and become introvert, it leads to shyness and fear. The users knowingly, live in fantasy world and far from the real world. They always prefer to glued to their mobile and less intimate with their blood relations. Intially, they feel comfortable with this routine. But, later this can push them towards isolation which can result in depression and mental trauma. For example the recent survey showed that 70% children and youth are suffer from depression those spend 24 hours on computer.
Furthermore, due to the social sites crime rate will also increase. People make fake account on facebook and fake relationship with others. This will enhance the chances of blackmailing. For instance, the extra marital affairs have been rising dramatically just because, of the social sites like facebook, Instagram and so on. Which ruin the life of several womens. Moreover, continuously spending time on computer or mobile phone put detrimental effect on user eyes and they suffer from several health maladies as well.
In conclusion, although it is now in trend to make friends online. It has brought a different kind of problems in human life such as isolation in life and emotional setbacks from fake identies.
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face it is a positive or a negative development 78
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy 67
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88152908653 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2968457227 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151862989862 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04271262824 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060601708719 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967516423729 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886349742442 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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