Technology has turned the whole world into a small village. Although, some individuals opine that the newspaper are the best way to know about the local issues. while other's prefer internet to enhance their information. I personally choose the internet.
On the one hand some individuals prefer newspaper for getting information. The first and foremost reason is that newspaper are the cheapest and reliable source of information. For example, unlike internet news, newspaper cost is less and people can get information of their own living area by reading local newspaper while internet confer information related to whole world. Secondly, it is easy to read news on newspaper by grey haired people.'' Because " they are unfamiliar with modern gadgets. To demonstrate, using internet for information create some health hazards like weak eye_ sight , headache and many others. Therefore, newspaper are the fabulous source of information.
On the other hand, some people believe that internet provide audio as well as video's related to latest issues in the world. Which, make it effective. To specify that it provides not only a local news but world information as well. Futhermore, internet provide wide range of information in distinct fields such as amusement , business, sports where folks can watch according to choice. In addition, in present scenario people have not enough time to read newspapers due to their hectic schedule. So mostly masses choose internet to read news anywhere anytime because of its easily accestability. To illustrate that some applications on internet like" inshorts " provide news in shorts which Consuming the time of reader and they can read while travelling and cooking as well.
In conclusion, both methods are significant in their own way. But i personally believe that internet is the need of an hour in the busiest world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34563758389 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74845208961 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3498621828 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.65 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282471397148 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753908389473 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616071687243 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139477624868 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609804887435 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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