Social media have influenced people bu changing the way they socialize with each other. It is a widely known fact that these days people prefer to have virtual meetings rather than in-person meets. I believe, though social media have made it possible to interact with friends at family at any time from their homes, however it has more disadvantages as it has affected the social life and skills of an individual.
With an increase in the advancement of technology, lot of social media apps are coming in the market. Apps like Facebook, Instagram, Twitter have crashed the market and almost everyone use these platform to interact with their near and dear ones. So, such kind of possible interaction with others from their comfortable home sofa has made people's life easier. Because of a hectic work schedule, individuals rely on such applications for their social interactions. A survey conducted by Social club Ahmedabad, stated that there was a significant decrease in number of social gathering after launch of Facebook video calling facilities.
Dependence on such virtual meeting apps has many negative impact on the society. First, when a person meets face to face, it helps them to develop communication skills, that are really important for young adults. As such skills have an advantage will applying for jobs at later stage, lacking of such skill might hinder their career prospects. Second, a live interaction is always beneficial as one can get to know what the other person is thinking by looking at their body language and facial expression, which is not possible over a phone call. Lastly, meeting in person offers a good connection among people, as some physical gestures make a relation stronger.
In conclusion, even though virtual social interaction offers the liberty to connect with anyone at any time. The disadvantages for lacking interactive skills and personal skills that are really important for over all growth of young people, is a big downside of social media apps.
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- Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things that we really do not need Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which do you agree 73
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 80
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeWrite at least 150 words 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'apply'
Suggestion: apply
.... As such skills have an advantage will applying for jobs at later stage, lacking of suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, look, really, second, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13455657492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66180855347 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3233885733 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151119150495 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527330481707 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053133897345 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889624027807 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488093504187 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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