Many people believe that elders were responsible to share their knowledge and expertise in the past, whereas in today's world, young generation have better understanding of modern time. I believe, it is a positive development, as with time, the technological invention had taken over and the people of new generation have better ideas rather than the people from the past.
In olden time, people had limited excess to the information. So, they had to rely on the elder's people experience to get a solution for any ongoing problem. For instance, if a person is sick, than people will ask for help from elders of the family instead of a doctor. They will give them traditional medicine, even though it works, but it take time to get back to normal life, as its effect is slow. However, this is not the case with today's generation. Nowadays, even if a person is unable to connect with the doctor, they will google the treatment for their illness and will resume their routine instantly.
Young generation, on the other hand have a better understanding of current affairs and development. Due to the advancement of technology, most of the old people are unable to understand and use the gadgets available in today's time. It gets difficult for them to cope up with the new inventions, as almost every day new products are being lunched in the market, or a product is upgraded. A survey conducted by Google Maps, stated that majority of elder people prefer to ask other people for direction, and refused to use Maps option on their cellphone. The reason was they failed to understand the directions given by the GPS system.
In conclusion, due to limited accessibility to any information was limited in the past, that made the people of that generation to rely on elders. However, in modern world, with the invention of new technology young people have a better knowledge to understand the modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... medicine, even though it works, but it take time to get back to normal life, as its...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86461538462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72557729621 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1322258983 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16280610952 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592562755803 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703996513811 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129542400848 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884245069562 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.