With the advent of internet, social media sites have gained a lot of popularity, and have become famous among people belonging to different age groups. Many people share their personal as well as professional information on such platform. This might lead to the misuse of the provided information by the hackers creating potential threat to the user. I believe, even though there are few risks associated in using such social apps, but the opportunity it gives to connect to people is lot more beneficial.
Nowadays, every individual would be having an account on almost all social media network. People coming from different cultural background, different financial status and people from two different generation, can all connect together on such social media platforms. These apps or sites uses personal as well as professional information while creating an account. Also, such information will be visible to people who use these apps, unless privacy mode is activated. So, when people choose to keep their profile open for everyone, chances are there that the provided information may be misused by hackers.
Hacking is now widely known, as these days hackers have became highly active, the question of security on such social sites as well as banking sites is now questionable. So as a user it is really important to manage privacy setting in order to avoid falling prey in the hands of hackers. Apart from this, the social media site helps people to stay in touch with their loved ones staying in a far away land. People are also able to share pictures and even live events on such media which really helps to stay connected in today's busy life. For instance, many people staying in a foreign country can attend their relatives wedding ceremony online, by doing live sessions on Facebook.
In conclusion, social media have a lot to offer to people. Though, there are chances of fraud through misuse of personal data, however this can be encountered by managing the private setting on different media applications. Other than this a lot of advantage like Chats, video calls as well as live chats are available on such media, which keeps people in touch with their loved ones.
- Some people believe that government money should be spent on important things rather than arts such as painting and music To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful others disagree Discuss both views and yo 78
- Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it 73
- Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences Some people think only government action can solve this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eneficial. Nowadays, every individual would be having an account on almost all...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...idely known, as these days hackers have became highly active, the question of security...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l as banking sites is now questionable. So as a user it is really important to manage...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...eople to stay in touch with their loved ones staying in a far away land. People are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01648351648 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53973970009 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5634860363 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261871154876 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953416400213 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782367376036 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182718151828 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372506785747 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.