Many people argue that the best way to travel in a city is by car, others believe that riding a bicycle is rather beneficial to move in the city. I believe, car definitely offers speed when a long distance is to be covered and save time to reach to a particular destination, however bicycle is perfect mode of transport when commuting the over crowded places like downtown area.
Cars are considered to be the fastest mode of transportation in a city as compared to bicycle and other public transport. However, as most of the people owns a personal vehicle, the number of cars running on the roads has been increased immensely. This situation has resulted traffic jams especially during peak hours. So, even though car offers speed, the traffic congestion caused by the frequent travelers makes it difficult to reach their destination in time. For instance, in Bangalore time taken to travel a distance of 5 km takes an hour during office time due to over crowding on the roads, which otherwise takes only 15 minutes.
On the other hand, using bicycle in congested area makes it a hassle free ride. Riding a bicycle is itself a task, as it requires lot of stamina and strength to paddle the cycle. Also, to cover long distance bicycle do not seem a viable option. However, when riding a short distance within the city, it can help to reach the final place easily, as one can ride the bicycle in narrow lane where cars are not allowed. A survey conducted by Mumbai traffic controller stated that when people have to travel short distance, a bicycle can help to reach there in 15 to 20 minutes whereas a can car takes more than an hour time.
In conclusion, a car is always a good option to travel in the outskirts of the city and when long distance are to be covered. As, in the city, the travelling time exceeds due to road blocks by excessive numbers of cars. So, when considering travelling in downtown areas, bicycle can help to reach the destination in time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53658938622 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517142857143 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2858917179 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198594870371 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771834597599 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846568135186 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138810222267 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539402916284 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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