Dear Mr and Mrs. Williams,
I am writing in regard to the noise complaint you raised recently. As I had some urgent need to renovate my house, that is causing noise troubles. I am extremely sorry for your inconvenience resulted due to my actions..
As I mentioned above I had to make some change in the arrangement of my living room furniture. Recently I had bought a TV cabinet, which needed to be placed in my main room, so in order to make way for this piece of furniture, I had to move few other furniture pieces. And, this resulted into noise pollution. Please accept my sincere apologies for the trouble that I have caused you.
I know that you are looking for a relaxing time after your hectic schedule at work, and you expect your neighbor to give you the piece of mind. So, I have made changes in the timing of doing the renovation work. Instead of evening hours, the work will be done during the day time, when no one will be at home and therefore no one will be troubled. And I believe it will just take a day or two to complete the work.
Again I am extremely sorry for causing great amount of trouble to you and your family. I hope you will forgive me for my actions, and I promise this kind of situation will not rise again.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely
Jayraj Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...inconvenience resulted due to my actions.. As I mentioned above I had to make...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onvenience resulted due to my actions.. As I mentioned above I had to make some ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ience resulted due to my actions.. As I mentioned above I had to make some ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, kind of, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38174273859 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40130328531 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585062240664 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2467032703 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265302253661 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896469748029 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797430789769 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122059887802 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772439905333 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.