Now days traffic jams are becoming a big problem in most cities and bigger tourism.some people suggest the widening of road's is a solution to this problem.Do you agree or disagree ?

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Now days traffic jams are becoming a big problem in most cities and bigger tourism.some people suggest the widening of road's is a solution to this problem.
Do you agree or disagree ?

Now days cities became popular for shopping ,entertainment, and another activity people do in our leisure time. I am disagree with statement increasing of cars day by day a wide range of roads can stop trafic jams no its not possible any more.we will discussed a impact of traffic jams in upcoming paragraph.

There are multifarious way to stop this problem of trafic jams its important because of our safety and healthy future.Firstly, it puts a bad impact on health.Life is too busy now days people dont have a much time for stop anywhere for long hours .In metro cities it happens daily...Few hours are waste due to trafic jams why? Because increasing of car day by day riads are shorter day by day according the cars.secondly,Government should take a strict action on this and they have to work on this immediately.Because nobody have right to play with another life.Government should be banned old vehicles and convience to people they dont have buy more than one car.

Furthermore, People also help each other to solve this problem people have to use public vehicles in our routine life it saves money, time and health.youngsters can do lot of things to save our future...multitudes force our parents and relative to use eco-friendly products and say no to petrol.

Overall,If government cant take a step in this field its results very harmful in future.people have to undestand and run with government.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96218487395 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32494206611 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9921292855 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.833333333 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212597904169 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109287931823 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367207146548 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123877154081 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600605813052 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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