Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others belive that meaure would be more effictive in improving road safety.Dicuss both these views and give your own opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drivers'' or 'driver's'?
Suggestion: drivers'; driver's
Road accidents takes many drivers life or many innocent people life beca...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rivers life or many innocent people life because of uncaring of traffic police .A...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e because of uncaring of traffic police .A strict action should be take when any ...
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Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... because of uncaring of traffic police .A strict action should be take when any i...
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Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
Suggestion: taken
...affic police .A strict action should be take when any incident happen because it not...
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Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...when any incident happen because it not happen again and save peoples life.we will dis...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , A
...ction may be stop road accidents Firstly,A strict action can be taken or a pnelty ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...r a pnelty if anybody break the rule it help in to solve this problem. People nowday...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a car or another vehicles fearless they dont have a fear of anybody they dont care o...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s they dont have a fear of anybody they dont care of anyone heart line.Government sh...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Government
...ody they dont care of anyone heart line.Government should handle strictly in this case bea...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... Of people died in road accidents they dont have any drawback its only one fault th...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...ule and another drive againest the rule.No body have a right to play anyone life i...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'Nobody'?
Suggestion: Nobody
...ule and another drive againest the rule.No body have a right to play anyone life if the...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...another drive againest the rule.No body have a right to play anyone life if they can...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...they can do this because of uncaring he going to jail for several years or death pena...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d stand all the roads .... at every road a one police van with speed meter they c...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...they can check the meter front car speed .youngsters can play a important role in ...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er front car speed .youngsters can play a important role in this multitudes have ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...youngsters can play a important role in this multitudes have to use seat belt when h...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ave to use seat belt when he was driving . Overall, i belive thai it is stoppab...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hai it is stoppable but we have ti make a environment to stop this . Its is poss...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut we have ti make a environment to stop this . Its is possible when people think...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have ti make a environment to stop this . Its is possible when people think a hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63498098859 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42819022125 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1290279316 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.375 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149963491936 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697972416547 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327993514063 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952318452587 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238249597606 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.