Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, medical science has shown rapid growth in medicine. During the development of medicine, there is a step of experimentation that they use animals to analyse the effectiveness of the medicine. a section of society has thought that animal testing should be banned because it is morally wrong, and we do not have the right to do this. although, opponents argue it is totally justified to save human lives. I strongly believe that the use of animals should be limited only to medical purposes, and in the course of the essay, I will discuss both viewpoints.
On the one hand, peoples have an argument that it is morally wrong that experimentation and do have the right to play with their lives if we have the power to control that animal it does not mean we do experiments on the part of the body and suffer it. For example, laboratory mice mostly use for experimentation if during that experiment they create a new disease and that have the long-term side effect it means that is also dangerous for human as well as animals.
On the other hand, scientists and doctors accept it, this is morally not right but they do not have any other way to do it. They believe that experimentation on the part of the body of mice or rats suffer by these research tests is justified if we human lives. They believe the opponent of this research do not have any problem if their family is treated with that medicine which made by these experimentations. I strongly believe that it should be banned non-medical tests and only use for that time when they do not have alternatives.
In conclusion, peoples think it is not justified we do experiment for ourself on animals, although others give a reason that we don't have other to do this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61812297735 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75201572621 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456310679612 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.013320185 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241693390632 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935611073337 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543606948401 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154903024271 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375701963595 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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