The nearby future is predicted to be seen changes in education by replace traditional teaching with automations. Due to advancements in science, this show a high propotion to happen and i agree with the oponion. As can be seen, alternative methods of high-tech teaching are replace traditional teaching with modern machines.
In my point of view, education must be the priority of modern society so that technology, especially artificial intelligence will show a significant role in increasing teaching quality. Education is an important factor that decides social development in general or a country in particular, which requires the first quality in science. Moreover, science is increasing faster and achieving dramatic achievements, such as artificial intelligence. Both facts below illustrate the alternativity of automation in teaching due to people's needs and advantages. For example, teaching online has become more and more popular due to the pandemic. Apps like Zoom not only brings lesson home but also give students and teachers convenient and experiences, this help students to keep on the study and stay safe from the pandemic.
Basically, artificial intelligence is a system using algorithms to think and work like human require, and that is a way to explain in general about the alternative to traditional teaching. Instead of teaching face-to-face as usual, people use modern supplies to support or change the previous methods. For example, replace classes with a teacher and students with an online class. Moreover, using automations such as smart boards, technoligical models,…etc. Predicting in a nearby day, teacher could also be replaced by robots.
In conclusion, the ability of replacing old-fashioned teaching with high-tech ones is predicted to happen in following years. Changing traditional education with automations not only show people development level but also inform the high civillization of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60338983051 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16872101574 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2147484205 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134449864003 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044178771278 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319066629224 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827871908229 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212404470301 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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