The crime rate reported in adolescents is increasing, therefore, some believed juvenile delinquents should be faced with the same penalty as grown-ups. In my opinion, this is a practical solution, nevertheless, the punishment should be considered on what crime was committed and how the young defendant is aware of the consequences.
It is indisputable that the age of crime is declining day by day and society has witnessed many teenagers or even kids commit a crime. Not only robbery or vandalizing, but there were also abusing and killing crimes done by those people. I have read news about a teenager who had hired three killers to get rid of her parents, or there was this case in which a young under 10-year-olds sister had tried to kill her brother. These crimes' severity is undoubted liken to those conducted by adults. If there are no strict rules and punishments, the crime will be worst in the long run. In fact, there were cases in which juvenile delinquent was punished as harsh as grown-ups, for example, there was a child who intentionally killed 2 people had to face life imprisonment
Nevertheless, adults are those who have been recognized as fully aware and responsible but not the young ones. Hence, the penalty of young people should be carefully considered before giving the last sentence as at that age their consciousness is not adequately developed, they could accidentally kill someone out of unremarkable conflicts such as an uncomfortable glace or a giggle. Apart from that, their post attitude should also be taken into consideration. If they feel regretful and apologetic, a strict penalty is indispensable.
In conclusion, there should be an appropriate punishment for juvenile delinquency depending on their crime and attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12847222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07209656351 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4357944809 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309912311465 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103063761198 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578948176791 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180171705862 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525905884219 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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