Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development?
During the last decades, pleasure activities have been changed by developing technologies. Juveniles are not attending to sport as well as before. This essay will debate that causes and drawbacks of this trend.
Computer games have some features that are attracted each teenager to play them. The first one is a subject of video games. Matters could get to children an extraordinary excitement which is never felt by sports. For example, there is a game called Need for Speed; the player drives an expensive car in high speed on a three-dimension graphic. Without a doubt, it is an adventure which has never been earned easily by sports. The next point is that by growing cities there is no place that children could play physical activities safely in comparison past. To illustrate, a couple of years ago young persons should play football in their yard, in contrast, at the contemporary time there is no place beyond skyscrapers.
On the other hand, computer games are replaced sports; some drawbacks are spring up by these technologies. Firstly, although the newly games are more exciting, they lead that some health diseases appear. A case in point, obesity is one of the significant health problems brought by these games. Children are sitting on a chair for a considerable time. As a result, they may never have a physical activity while they are playing. Their body consumes fats slowly. For this reason, they will be overweight. Secondly, computer instruments are expensive. Because of this, a purchaser must spend an enormous budget to play. Thus, families’ financial issues are affected by video games.
To conclude, this essay has shown that some feature of video games like excitement and graphic leads that playing this kind of game is more common than sports besides, how this phenomenon affect health issues and finance of players.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in contrast, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08852459016 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71837487218 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4328140177 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9047619048 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5238095238 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275254004268 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681091509858 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579977679082 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15123532729 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443376059126 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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