Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a growing controversy over the activity should be operated in the people’s free time. Most of the people believe that sports must be society's priority while others consist of that having pleasure activities is better. I am personally of this idea that sports are of high importance. In this article, the polarized opinions will be briefly interpreted.
There is a wide range of operations that could be operated when people are willing to spend their free time. This could boost the mental wellness rates in one society. in fact, the rate of mental disease such as depression decrease. In addition, recreational activities may have a positive impact on young people’s manners if the government desire to reduce crime statistics. These effects reveal when pleasure activities are chosen for free time.
Pastime is a crucial factor for a generation, although sports are a critical operation which should make implicit in a society. If there were no physical activities, the amount of significant diseases would appear. A case in point, settlement causes obesity; albeit have a diet. Because of this, the array of people who are overweight face some bodies difficulties like a heart attack. Furthermore, people could answer both pleasure and fitness by acting physically. Thus, these reasons clear why playing sport are desired by most of the people.
By and large, there is an array of people who has this idea that sports must be relevant, whereas, doing recreational activities done in pleasure time is supported by the others. Nevertheless, it is very vital to have a pleasure period, having in shape and healthy body obtained by sports is outweighed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in fact, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17279411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83489736286 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.601882465 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7647058824 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28622168819 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814683072317 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712426210579 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174574220353 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731370641831 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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