Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents and teachers to reduce it?
It is the fact that, the crime rate has been increasing day by day in juvenile. I believe that several reasons have played important role in children’s bough-up. Parents and teachers should take care of their children.
Personally, I believe that the most responsible factor for increasing crime in the youth is the modern lifestyle. Working parents have not enough time to enjoy with their family. Also, They have not given enough time to explain to their children that what is good for them. Due to these reasons the young people do what they wants and they have not passions to think before doing. For example, in this materialistic life, they might do things wrong and these things will be converted in crime. In addition, nowadays, the youth has been inspired from the movie and they try to live like reel life. For that they need more money to fulfilled their needs and finally it will result in a crime.
These situations has only prevented while taking care during children bought-up. Parents should give enough understanding that what is good or bad for them. If children do any unethical things, parents must try to explain them instead of scolding. Also, parents should give enough freedom to live their lives because more pressure can lead to more crime for children. Moreover, teachers play a vital role in making the student’s life. Teachers should provide fare guide for doing things in the right manner as well as create more friendly environments for their students. Also, teachers should try to become a friend of their pupils instead of instructing. All of these efforts lead to a better society with better human being.
In conclusion, I believe that parents and teachers try to be a good companion for their children as well as their students which can catalyst to a well being society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...e reasons the young people do what they wants and they have not passions to think bef...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...ll result in a crime. These situations has only prevented while taking care during...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223529411765 0.247107548796 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.179411764706 0.15552993741 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764705882353 0.0946569551029 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0617647058824 0.0501201869031 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0676470588235 0.0437536398559 155% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126470588235 0.122223957237 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0529411764706 0.0403219363162 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45506319295 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0411764705882 0.0326786765898 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0676470588235 0.0861751148067 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0323529411765 0.0214082191602 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117647058824 0.0119246538136 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1813.0 1933.38276553 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.052104208 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84838709677 6.10592293882 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20519365927 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.37474360046 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229773462783 0.284197041944 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148867313916 0.203843217982 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938511326861 0.137313986986 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45506319295 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.560935902166 90% => OK
Word variations: 50.9063770624 60.7401812628 84% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0911823647 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2631578947 20.7725350517 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5291351885 49.5273876611 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.021341463 93.4120437189 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8993902439 15.2821509519 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.637195121951 0.594174754866 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 39.2405041731 49.1922392462 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.30476190476 1.69127372897 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.281449156491 0.332604825255 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102848372791 0.102734651613 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0998559837924 0.0668474354756 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452639026957 0.534917948617 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166851003973 0.148666948902 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968041563182 0.13441755203 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620968672204 0.0742828286743 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330183693054 0.324241079732 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0335579241629 0.0640056729886 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183242259527 0.22793763319 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555484804709 0.0582452615562 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.60220440882 192% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9