In recent times, huge numer of identities has been found in different cultures globally. This essay will discuss potential causes behind this trend and in my prospective, on balance, similarities in cultures are highly beneficial.
The first potential reason behind this trend is globalisation. Due to affordability in aviation industry and liberal policies of different nations, allow individuals to settle in foreign countries. The people who move to other country permanently, socialise with natives and adapt their culture partially without recognising it. Secondly, development in field of technology, also plays vital role to decrease differences in cultures. In early part of the twenty-first century, majority have an access of mobile devices and internet. Because of this, users of this advance devices, are consume content from all over the world and accept things from other cultures unconsciously.
Discussing the gains of minor alterations in cultures. To begin with, the earth would be more peaceful place to live. By removing differences and adopting other cultures, citizens can easily adapt people from other nationalities which reduce the racism and groupism all around the world. As a consequence, individuals can live with great ease and safety. In addition, it is greatly beneficial for tourism industry. People are travel far distances either to meet their relatives or attend function which booms the traveling industry and different cultures gain benefits of foreign exchange because they spend money on facilities which they took during the trip.
In conclusion, there are several reasons such as fast paced developing technology as well as globalisation plays crucial role to less evident in cultural basis. As a result, the environment become more peaceful to live for humankind and it increase trade amongst countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...the twenty-first century, majority have an access of mobile devices and internet. Because...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...his, users of this advance devices, are consume content from all over the world and acc...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...e peaceful to live for humankind and it increase trade amongst countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58156028369 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91247678101 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9743684302 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157557400165 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436887684439 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314088865872 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930900624901 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124045803662 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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