Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because
people follow the same media. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the
disadvantages?
We are now living in the era of global trends. As a result, it is obvious that countries are becoming increasingly closer together in all aspects of social and economic life, including the media. Some people, however, consider that such uniformity is not entirely advantageous. This essay will look at both sides of this issue.
First, one advantage of the same media is that people can update information easily and quickly. This will bring numerous benefits because information and knowledge are the main factors in the economic well-being of society. For example, people in developing countries can use the internet to access free information and knowledge sources for studying and learning. When people's awareness is raised, they will be able to make more money, which contributes to the economic well-being of the country. Secondly, people may have more opportunities to embrace different cultures. This helps to integrate better and is also in line with the global trend. However, cultural interference bring disadvantages as well.
When everyone uses the same media, a global society emerges that is devoid of the cultural uniqueness of countries. That is vital in the way everyone identifies themselves and where they belong. For example, although Japan is a rich cultural Asian country, they have now abandoned the Lunar New Year in favour of the Western New Year to accommodate international business hours. As a result, cultural diversity is dwindling.
To summarize, despite the fact that there are several negatives in the media, I believe the advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32170542636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9191605141 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5566289392 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217284598248 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600969873346 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563026764895 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120258521117 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583300310755 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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