Nowadays families move to different countries for work some people think it has a negative effect on children while others disagree discuss both views and give your own opinion
In modern era, there is a growing trend of families migrating to various nations in search of work. Some individuals argue this could have negative consequences on children. However, in my opinion it has more benefits than the drawbacks and the following essay will discuss both in details.
To begin with , a family moving to abroad can cause some problems. Firstly,taking children to other countries would have negative impact on children psychology. For instance. Kids take long time to integrate into new culture and environment since they have to leave their close friends and family members contributing to their loneliness and homesickness. Secondaly , it give bad effect on kids language barrier which inculate the stress level. So, it has bad effect on offsprings lifestyle.
On the other hand , a family migrate foreign for work have more advantages. First of all , moving kids with theirs family to distinct nation would have a positive attitude that opportunities of jobs are easily available which provide them better living standard and more comfortable life. Secondary, Education system are also quite well there that assist then to escalate their knowledge and skills. Last but not least , immigrant children are more successful in climbing the ladder of their career even compared to natives. Additionally , they hold more pivotal positions in different areas.
In conclusion, from my perspective, for children, the benefits of moving abroad outweigh the drawbacks they will have a brighter future due to the ampler presence of job chances and eliminations if old countries complications.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41035856574 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88193177267 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649402390438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.453594801 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240239784166 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782312221878 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485793807099 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139373538764 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450125478036 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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