Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way of life?
Due to rapid advancements in technologies providing comfortable and easy living to humans as well as it is easy for people to make meal quickly. However, a majority of restaurants offer a vast varieties of cuisines to humans and great numbers of cooking equipment’s make it convenient to cook food faster.
To begin with, today a most cafeterias, hotels and restaurants giving a several items of meals to masses on very reasonable prices at anytime anywhere so it’s beneficial for humans as they have not enough time to prepare food at home the reason is that everyone have hattrick schedule and they run after earning more wealth. In addition to this, no parents doing works at late night and they can come back home till midnight so that time they get tied and have not strength to cook dinner in that time they give preference to order meals at online. Even though, in present days markets are fully with many types of sealed foods which very convenient to cook so that is why huge number of people buy these packages meals like sandwiches, vegetables, piranhas etcetera. In other words, it is good to saying that restaurants and hotels services make convenient and comfortable of humans. For example, tomato is one of new fast food company which widely famous among worldwide which can give home delivery when anyone can order food on tomato.
Furthermore, a huge amount of cooking applicinies such as rice cooker, pressure cooker, microwave electric induction play crucial role in modern men’s life as humans can easily cook food in those items. Moreover, rice cooker are beneficial to cook rice, vegetables and other dishes with steam in few minutes and these meals are healthy for people’s bodies. Similarly, microwave is another machine which can help masses to make various types of food items and use to warm meals as well as electric induction can used by humans to cook food at anywhere with the help of electricity. Apart from this, these equipment’s upgrades human’s lives and with the aid of these people can consume some amount of time in their busy workloads as well as use this period with families or use for another essential work. For instance, a refrigerator is another invention of technology which can keep food fresh at longer times so humans can store remaining meals inside it and expand this food again.
In conclusion, although improvement in technologies make it’s easier for people to prepare meals with the help of various appliciness and restaurants services but these food are sometimes perilous for people’s health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'variety'?
Suggestion: variety
... a majority of restaurants offer a vast varieties of cuisines to humans and great numbers...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'item'?
Suggestion: item
...hotels and restaurants giving a several items of meals to masses on very reasonable p...
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Line 3, column 804, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'say'?
Suggestion: say
...etcetera. In other words, it is good to saying that restaurants and hotels services ma...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re, a huge amount of cooking applicinies such as rice cooker, pressure cooker, mi...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...to make various types of food items and use to warm meals as well as electric induc...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...ppliciness and restaurants services but these food are sometimes perilous for people'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03953488372 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74321622595 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513953488372 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2815545556 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.692307692 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0769230769 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101468323962 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04143756764 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317351446117 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668155823782 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288761691591 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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