Nowadays, food is transported long distances before being sold to consumers. This essay will discuss the reasons why this happens and whether this is a positive or negative development.
There are several changes that have happened to society that have led to food being transported longer distances than in the past. Firstly, a lot of previously fertile areas have been damaged due to pollution and development. As a result, many local communities now have no choice but to eat food grown in faraway places. A second cause is the fact that in modern times, people have begun moving to cities. Naturally, the food requirements of today’s cities are enormous, so growing food locally is not realistic.
I believe that the change toward eating food that has been transported long distances has been overall detrimental. This is because the process for storing and transporting food affects the quality of the food itself. For example, if fruits are picked when they are ripe, the transportation process will bruise and damage them. The only solution is to pick the fruit when it is not fully ripened, which results in fruit that does not taste as sweet as if it was picked locally. Furthermore, when food is frozen, which is a common requirement when transporting it long distances, the nutritional value decreases.
In conclusion, the causes of the change in the way food is transported are land degradation and the urbanization of the global population, and I would argue that this is a negative development because of the negative effects this has had on the flavor and nutritional value of modern food.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96652719665 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82170967365 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560669456067 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1302378032 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239863032557 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847806768577 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824346533669 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170189645925 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709579167823 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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