Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a fact that extinction is increasing these days. People have different views about protecting creatures. While some feel that we should consider about human issues, I support those who are at the opinion that animals need to be protected from being disappeared.
On the one hand, there are some arguments why some people believe that the extinction of animals is not necessary to be saved. First of all, there are too many issues among humanity which should be consider about, such as global hunger, homelessness among individuals and others. If people will not concrete on these it will cause human death. Another reason why supporters of human problems put forward is that people are the smartest creatures and without them lifestyle of all beings would be disastrous.
On the other hand, animals should be secured from dying out. Firstly, animals are part of the nature and they also have equal rights to live as human do. For example, it is not ethical hunting for animals just for themselves fun or wish, while they are waiting for human help. Obviously, this is a reason that some animals are shrinking by period of time. People must rectify faults they have made. Secondly, being indifferent to this happenings will result to a disruption balance among wildlife and not only. For instance, from being fully extinct of one kind of animlals which another was feeding, it can start hunting to an another, as a result it can damage it's life balance. In consequence it will influence dreadful effect as well to a humanity. In other words humanity and animal words are closely connected.
For the reasons mentioned above it is clear that the extinction of animals is also one problem of humanity and by saving animals from disappearing they will resolve one of themselves problems.
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- Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings Discuss both views and give y 56
- Nowadays food is transported long distances before being sold to consumers This essay will discuss the reasons why this happens and whether this is a positive or negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...y issues among humanity which should be consider about, such as global hunger, homelessn...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elessness among individuals and others. If people will not concrete on these it wi...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ason that some animals are shrinking by period of time. People must rectify faults they have m...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve made. Secondly, being indifferent to this happenings will result to a disruption ...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: ',' or 'another ,'.
Suggestion: ,; another ,
...her was feeding, it can start hunting to an another, as a result it can damage its life bala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93399339934 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52421962064 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8206472657 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9411764706 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34239607297 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110867767488 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827110547956 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219683527348 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504077329124 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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