Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Currently, a large amount of profit comes from the international tourism makes this industry significant development. However a proportion stated that instead of connecting people around the world, travelling abroad probably creates the tension between travellers and the local citizens because of the different cultures. Personally, a partial agreement is my point of views. In this essay, evidence and information are give to clarify my position of views.
On one hand, the difference in weather, cuisine, culture… may create the level of tension when travelling abroad. Most people can not adapt the new environment immediately. As a result, the uncomfortable and anxiety feeling are likely to increase. For example, a long trip to other country has a likelihood of making travelers feel tired. Moreover, the difference cuisine might challenge the taste of visitors in the first few days as the local special foods sometimes may not easy to accept by foreigners. In addition, because of the language barrier there is a lack of understanding between local people and travelers. As a result, the tension is possible generated by the physical fatigue after a long haul flight, unsatisfactory appetite and the uncomfortable in communication.
On the other hand, travelling is considered to be one of the most enrich experiences. A trip can offer us a chance to live in an utterly new atmosphere like doing things we can not do in our daily live, eating variety of new foods, practicing new languages, understanding the local customs and practices. At the beginning, the tension might exist, but after a long period, travelers will find out the interesting part of the countries and begin to connect with local citizens by trying to share information and study the history of the destination. For example, Chinese foods might be too spicy and oily, but once visitors can handle that, the amazing dishes such as “Peking roasted duck” or “Phoenix tail shrimp” with the interesting stories behind each cuisine will be an unforgettable experience appetizing in our life.
To conclude, because of the benefit of helping people learn new knowledge and understand people, international tourism become the leading role of service industry in many countries. But to reduce the unexpected tension, travelers should prepare carefully about the knowledge of the destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about the knowledge of the destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.384 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08585302451 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570666666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3821411145 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.764705882 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191281399094 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055514275836 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631160568788 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127455623325 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682600590024 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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