In this modern era, human beings are suffered from the consequences of global warming effects. A proportion states that besides the natural process, mankind has contributed intensively activities causing this phenomenon. In this essay, evidence and information are given to clarify the multi-factorial combined from different aspects of human activities, and some solutions to alleviate this circumstance.
Firstly, about the causes, with the overpopulation explosion, people have to exhaust the fossil fuel sources to sustain the modern living style causing a tremendous amount of CO2 emission, directly adding to the green house effect and global warming situation. In the detail, the first industrial revolution in 1970 played an important role in transiting hand production methods to machines. Besides the advantages in numerous facets for life, including manufacture, transportation and household purposes, the massive CO2 released to environment when burning fossil fuels drastically worsens situation of global warming. Moreover, the deforestation caused by human beings leading to the deleterious a source of absorb CO2 and other potential harmful gases. Naturally, CO2 absorbs infrared radiation allowing sunshine penetrate the Earth’s surface, while inhibits the radiation emissions to the space. As a result, our planet has the temperature increased.
Secondly, regarding the solutions, expanding the use of renewable energy by investing in efficient energy technologies and industries has the significant chance of decreasing the CO2 emission and aiding our Earth in reducing pollution. Additionally, the government over the world should find out the optimizing solution to prevent the tropical forest from deforesting.
To conclude, due to variety activities of human beings, the climate changes significant over the period. Solving the problems related to the escalating in global warming situation needs to be considered severely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97864768683 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11856282205 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.470849461 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135412421223 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467150390721 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035316160719 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748330916665 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039983572411 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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