Nowadays, international tourism is biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you believe
Opportunities to connect nations are flourishing, thereby giving wings to tourism industry. Sadly, it is reported that discrepancies in culture between nations creates tension among people rather than harmony. However, I partially agree with this thought and in this essay will discuss about reasons for this tension and ways to avoid this.
Advertisements and promotions create awareness of different exhilarating tourist spots. Moreover, when these are publicized online, it reaches to wider public thus, attracting local and international tourists. There are various elements that build up stress between these two parties. Firstly, local expect visitors to assimilate with their culture that they believe can be shown through clothing and other gestures. For example, type of clothes European wears completely differs from south Indian local. As, in India, bodies are protected like treasure while foreigners believe in being independent. Secondly, animals are considered as family members and can be taken in restaurants and other public places in foreign countries. In contrast to this, most of the places restrict entry of animals in public places in India. Thirdly, in Arab countries, culture is quite different and it is very difficult to see woman driving. So, through these points it is quite evident that disparities in culture of tourists and locals may turn the trip chaotic rather than happy.
However, when tourists are visiting the public spots, they should be accepted warmly irrespective of their culture. After all, a guest should be respected in the host country as they are new to the place and also have a communication gap due to the language. Additionally, if only we could provide comfort to the guests they will be willing to merge with the local culture. Hence, thinking should be broadened and discrepancies should be accepted.
Certain cultures of visitors can be accepted like clothing but other cultures that greatly affect sentiments of locals like no footwear at religious places should be considered. So, having rules at certain places is acceptable. To add, providing brief idea of culture of that place through blogs can be quite helpful for tourists to plan their trip and make it enjoyable.
To Summarise, tourism is a chance to cut the gap between nations and it can be achieved through accepting culture of one other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...through accepting culture of one other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, after all, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73427626012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9289535542 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990921626633 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336758787949 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445438617697 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061234883261 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529073690768 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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