Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather then understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Tourism industries are growing rapidly in the world l. This is because, the people who belong from different culture they visit the nation where religion is different and they interact with locals due to this, two religion clash and it will jeopardise for particular country. I disagree on large extent with the situation and it will discussed further.
To support my stand the first reason is holidaymakers are always explore place for their enjoyment, getting some knowledge and so on. To explain this, tourist are always visit any places for exploration and spend their precious time at particular destination. They are not come for any interaction with locals about religious. Hence, the clashing of culture is very rare.
Furthermore, in the era of modern world, there is no space for any personal religion and the world dominated equally to all. To precise more, there is no space for human can not go for exploration except government premises. Moreover, today every culture respect others moral values and these days people are more welcoming and supportive than past. So generally there are no chance of cultural war in tourist country.
Whilst, there are few consequences in some tourism namely, visiting religious building, exploring local culture, and many more. In this kind of tourism tourist can not taken care of rules and regulations of place such as wearing full clothes in temple, cover head in gurdwara, and wash hand and legs before entering mosque. This kind of rules are obeying by visitor and it will lead to cultural crisis.
In conclusion, tourism has no boundary for culture in any nation. However, make sure that tradition of local culture is not annoying otherwise it will creat tension.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'clash' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clashes'.
Suggestion: clashes
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explored'.
Suggestion: explored
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'visited'.
Suggestion: visited
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13028169014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57178962295 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1387561508 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143606599074 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509506186798 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519347699625 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862985472016 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674589965086 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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