Nowadays, it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
There is a trend that an increasing number of people choose foreign countries as their travel destinations in the recent years. Personally, I think this is a positive trend which I will elaborate further in the following paragraphs.
There are several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, the cost of flight has been reduced due to the development of technology, which made international travel more affordable. Secondly, as English has become the dominant language worldwide, more schools in different countries have set up English courses, more people are willing to travel to foreign countries because they would not encounter the language barrier. Furthermore, as connections between different countries have become closer, the visa application system has become more convenient. It is easier to get a foreign visa than before.
In my view, the development of international travel should be seen as a positive trend. To begin with, the rising number of tourists can drive the demand for related products and services such as accommodations, transport and tourist attraction’s tickets. This progress can generate more employment opportunities, so that local people would earn a higher salary, which can promote the local economy. In addition, from individual’s perspective, travelling abroad can provide them first-hand experiences about different culture, so that their learning about foreign language and culture will become more interactive and engaging, which could facilitate their understanding about different cultures.
As discussed above, I think that the phenomenon of more people travel to foreign countries is positive since it can benefit both the local economy and the individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in addition, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73540856031 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16586645517 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2657422941 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15333258503 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592153022525 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223571779691 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959475013483 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106324944585 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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