The Internet, since its invention, two decades ago, it becomes an essential part of daily routine. As far as the Internet affect our personal life, moreover, almost all working industries have been also affected. Owing to this vast of meetings or workshops happening online, without in-person presence. This phenomenon brings many merits, such as 24/7 availability for urgent meetings as well as its impact to a wide group of people.
On the one hand, online training as a modern trend in education has some demerits. Firstly, participants are not allowed to ask future questions while in training as vast of training sessions are developed really general. Hence, if a participant has future questions or doubts of what he or she is learning, there is no tutor to provide a future explanation. Moreover, many such trainings are general and do not provide in-deep explanations, which might be available during face-to-face training.
On the other hand, online communication and training is a modern method. Its availability 24/7 allows its participants to attend training at the time which suits them the best. They are no longer engaged to attend such workshops or training at a certain time. Furthermore, online training can easily impact more participants at one time or in the shorter period than setting face-to-face training. As for meetings, many multinational companies are allowed to have meeting at the same time with participants from all over the world, without needs to fly to one destination. As a result of this, not only can managers contact almost instantly with their counterparts around the world, but also its a cheap way due to savings for flight tickets and accommodation.
In short, whereas, face-to-face communication has its merits such as getting deeper into the problems or further questioning, online training and communication are cheaper, faster and modern method for such purposes.
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- The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010. 78
- Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic big cities. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 693, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...counterparts around the world, but also its a cheap way due to savings for flight t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, while, as for, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2908496732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99323036163 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2201718323 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149481456976 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558490688249 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396469500006 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882688475335 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240867352097 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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