Nowadays many children are being brought up in single parent families.What are the causes of this,What effets can be seen as a result of this
It is true that these days raising children in one-parent families is becoming common.This essay will discuss both the main causes of single parent families and the possible effects of this issue.
There are some reasons for bringing up children in one-parent families.One reason is the relationship between husbands and wives.That is to say,some couples do not have mutual understanding and they can be cynical.This,in turn,leads to divorce cases.For example,After getting a divorce,either mothers or fathers has custody of their children in many cases.Furthermore,some women get pregnant without any married and become a single mother.In fact,some young generation consider that getting married has a lot of responsibility,this is why after having a baby,single mothers may only be responsible for their children.For instance,in some countries,single mothers who bring up their children, account for approximately 2,3% of population.
One possible effect of bringing up children alone is that they may feel loneliness and suffer from psychological problems.Both mothers and fathers play an important role in their children's psychological well-being, so some children in one-parent families may often suffer from stress and depression.
Another important cause is that they may face financial problems.Single parents spend most of their time on earning money for living as a result they cannot find the time to pay attention to the children.For example,young individuals who grew up in one-parent families,may turn to crime or become a drug addict.
In conclusion,there are some causes for bringing up children in single parent families related to the relationship of couples and becoming a single mother without marriage.The main effects for children are that they would suffer from psychological problems and tend to be criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in many cases, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75182481752 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55224810796 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.65168072 49.4020404114 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.2 106.682146367 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6 7.06120827912 377% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246635208104 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155333583043 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483059571537 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155333583043 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483059571537 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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