Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Number of people who migrating to cities from rural areas for academic purpose and job placements has been escalating recently. leaving born areas would be beneficial to the people in terms of esteemed social status, better quality of education, higher standard of living. Owing to the fact that, such transfer may have positive results not only to the person but also the family and society.
Initially, quality and quantity of education system would be in highest level in most of the cities as compared to rural community. Since, pupil who attend the schooling in such institution, would lead to more civility, academic scholarships, and better chance to get job placement or higher study opportunities. Secondly, students who transfer urban or other countries for studies, often get a chance to attend campus interviews and job placements easily. At once, city center school have a choice to develop linguistic and cultural development would also helpful to get a good job and life style. For instance, students who went outside the rural areas have a better ability to communicate with others with multilingual knowledge.
Not to be out done, leaving rural areas to cities would lead to the people have had a positive energy in financial status, living style and social status as well.To illustrate, in Philippines, economic growth is mostly depend upon the overseas workers from various countries who have high standard of education. Furthermore, people who went outside places for future growth may have an asset of birth place development and publicity. For example, most of the village development program organizers in Bangladesh reveal the number of members from rural areas is higher than the urban side.
However, march to the cities would have some negative impacts like, missing many cultural celebrations, lack of parental physical support and some secret memories. People who are away from home would have less chance to attend every functions and parental physical care and overall missing of friends and family. Nonetheless, such mild adverse effect may overcome by technology and arranging social events in living area to some extent.
To sum up, leaving home area would have nostalgic feeling in many ways. nevertheless, the upper side of such migration would have fascinating development in peoples standard of living and rural progression. Make use of such transfer would have surpass the limited difficulties when compared to advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33248081841 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71623053288 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526854219949 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1857708469 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.647058824 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154808735654 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563847773721 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333909852071 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098160254658 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305568685944 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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