Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons for this? Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, in a lot of countries, youths migrate from rural to urban areas in order to study or work, and this pays off with a better living standard. The advancement is often cherished as a vast achievement, but this comes with untold risks threatening to negate any benefit it brings.
It is obvious that young people relocate to cities because of better jobs or higher institution, and they usually get more satisfactory ones. For example, the average youth in the city get double wages and has access to advanced technological schools compared to those in rural areas. So, the usual complaints that they are living below poverty line, or they are studying unwanted courses in less developed areas, are being resolved.
Despite these benefits, working or studying in cities have some disadvantages which will be taken into account. Firstly, cities tend to be overcrowded as more and more youths move in and, consequently, accommodation would be more difficult and somewhat unaffordable. Secondly, transportation in urban areas may pose some health problems to young ones. Since there are a lot of vehicles that are emitting carbon dioxide in the air that many individuals are inhaling, there would be a rising rate of respiratory diseases or cancer, which is dangerous to the health of youths. Finally, the overall cost of living may be higher than budgeted because money would be spent on unexpected expenses ranging from housing, tuition to health-related issues, and this is unfavourable cost for young adults.
In conclusion, the ever-increasing relocation rate of many young ones from the rural to urban areas is primarily to get better paying jobs or quality education, which is being achieved. However, major downsides of relocating to cities, such as unfavorable health condition and high cost of living are so much that its benefits are no longer valued.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87456902406 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8557202488 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194232265953 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689970399751 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436857611704 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118347119216 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042273608782 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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