Nowadays in many families, the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples.
The modern world has become more competitive where both parents have to work for supporting their family’s basic needs hence grandparents have the burden of bringing up grandchildren. This is not a healthy practice as grandparents would need additional care for themselves because of their old age. This essay will discuss why grandparents should't be burdened for bringing up children.
Grandparents are typically old aged and have numerous numbers of health conditions such as Blood pressure, Diabetes and other diseases due to which, they would require more care and rest. They will be slow in movements and their bodies won’t be as flexible as the young ages hence, any sudden movements would cause more pain to them. For example, grandparents have high levels of anxiety and stress results in heart attack, stroke etc.
On the other hand, parents should take up the responsibility of taking care of children and also their parents. They need to play a vital role and keep up a good work life balance also should avoid skipping their responsibilities. In a recent survey stated that senior citizens have more stress when compared to younger generation due to not proper relaxation as they already have supported a lot for their family. Both parents should have equal contribution in supporting their children. Moreover, spending some time with children would relatively help parents to relieve stress and other mental health issues. For example, many parents tend to spend their weekends with families which promotes their mental health naturally.
To conclude with, Parents should avoid the habit of giving too many responsibilities to old people instead should organize their time with children to maintain a healthy relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34296028881 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80877562353 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8437927691 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208373825922 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875373185612 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654960488165 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134616993793 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714938218201 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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