Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give own opinion
On the pace of life, people hold different viewpoints about many ways to bring up children. While some argue that it would be better FOR CHILDREN to be looked after by grandparents, I am supporting the point of view that children should attend childcare organizations for the best care.
There are some remarkable reasons for children being grown up with grandparents. It would compensate for parents' love and care for their children while they are away from home for an extended period of time. Interacting between them not only strengthens members' bonds, especially in extended families but also narrows the generation gap in modern life. When the standard of living of human BEINGS rises, this method can also be used to enhance internal budgets by cutting down the expense of child care, traveling, and so on.
However, I strongly believe that child-care organizations should be a better option for upbringing children. First and foremost, children will have a suitable and healthy environment in which they can make friends, pursue their own interests, and develop themselves despite being in the vicinity of the house. Having a good educational environment for children also makes their parents feel comfortable and satisfied. The health issues of grandparents should be taken into consideration if children are grown by them. So many many unpredictable accidents can happen and lead to serious consequences for children because they canNOT follow all the time.
In conclusion, although there are plenty of benefits FROM grandparents WHEN CHILDREN ARE RAISED BY THEM, I still keep my perspective about the importance of children's healthcare centers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33460076046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88906336028 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4044655123 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199770809244 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764205582112 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313268841986 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120861335386 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409618379749 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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