Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?
It is true that, in the modern era, many jobs are becoming very stressful for workers and their working hour also expands. This essay will point out three main causes and suggest some possible sulutions.
In my opinion, there are the three reason major about various jobs are become stressful with workers and the working day is longer. The problems one, Work stress can affect work performance, which in turn could put your job at risk. The stress can also make you unwell and affect your relationship with your partner, children and friends. The problems two, The relationship pressure as a source of work-related stress. As a result these difficult relationships become sources of stress related to your employment situation. The finally, that lack of control is often a source of job-related stress. The WHO points out that stress can occur when employees have little control over work processes.
However, If companies want to reduce stress at work and shorten working day for their employees, some solutions need to be taken into consideration. . Firstly, a simple solution would be to talk to them about the specific factors that make their jobs stressful. For example, such as failing equipment, understaffing, or a lack of supervisor feedback may be relatively straightforward to address. A second measure would be communicate with your employees one-on-one. For example listening attentively face-to-face will make an employee feel heard and understood. Finally, The employer able organization for employees have outdoor activities . For instance, such as walking,yoga, running, dancing, drumming is especially soothing for the nervous system.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as stressfull or the working day longer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35460992908 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91808587155 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6868252852 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301080171661 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964250066514 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533639973883 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171799692182 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400751030515 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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