Irrefutable, in this modern era everyone want to become successful in their life, whereas the proponents of the former assert that many employments are very worried and working time is also long. This essay intends to analyse the several rationales as well, suggest ample solutions of this phenomenon in the upcoming paragraph.
To embark on the topic, there are numerous factors that illustrates why jobs are stressfull and way employers spend lot of time in business. First and the foremost there are huge competion among companies. Moreover they want that their product sell at international level, for that employers do toil work, if this are not happen then they want depression and do work for long time. Furthermore employer forces their employees still their company can grow dramatically even manager give target to their workers. What is more, everyone have a desire to ern ample monetary although, through promotion company head allure them. To cite an epitomize, a survey was conducted by the trade department that depicted, numerous workers suffered from anxiety due to workforce.
On the paradoxical side, manager can be provide enough amenities to reduce the of work and burden of their employees. Initially, they should provide break and holidays yet they accquair refreshment and spend their time out of work. Secondly, health facilities should be given by them consequently, they are healthy from physical and mentally. Last but not the least, if they few employees then they hire other employees.
In final reckoning, I would like to recapitulate that they are worried due to many reasons, but if these solution accept, they can easily overcome on it.
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- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ere are huge competion among companies. Moreover they want that their product sell at in...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...employers do toil work, if this are not happen then they want depression and do work f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...t depression and do work for long time. Furthermore employer forces their employees still t...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...otion company head allure them. To cite an epitomize, a survey was conducted by the trade de...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by the trade department that depicted, numerous workers suffered from anxiety d...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this solution' or 'these solutions'?
Suggestion: this solution; these solutions
...are worried due to many reasons, but if these solution accept, they can easily overcome on it....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, whereas, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68980700579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2648922403 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200993302356 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592241364284 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491493613264 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107780381759 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628968608286 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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