Irrefutable, family is a mandatory part of individuals life,whereas,the proponents of the former assert that care taker has a great impact on off spring's life and evolution then others utilities likewise, near and dear ,television, music,and so on .This essay to intends to analyse more influence of family rather than other factors.
To embark on the topic. Family is part and parcel of life ,it plays an amazing role because these are first teacher who teach etiquettes their pupils and make good citizen of society. Although, they tech them about wrong and write as well as they give their best effort to set up their well future. To cite an epitome, a survey was conducted by the social department that illustrated the toil work of old generations for their pupils.
On the paradoxical side,there are also other factors those influence children's mentality from diverse ways. First and the foremost, companion is obligatory part of life as we can share our thin and thik situation, they teach us how to stand in ups and downs.secondly, TV children attend lots of channel from that they are inspired to do unique in their life as well as they set goal through their favorite movie .Furthermore, music represent the humanistic whenever they listen song ,they knew about culture value.
I final reckoning, I would like to recapitulate that both are obligatory part of life ,but they are more effected by family.
- It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university while others claim that a university education should be a universal right Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion 11
- The bar chart below gives information about the amount of tax that various and cultural organizations were required to pay last year 69
- Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer What are the reasons for this What can employers do to help employees 78
- Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97046413502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76222783552 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.494181344 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.25 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309773312449 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158636205723 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184728700844 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0208908320266 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00666001376363 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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