Nowadays many parents send out their kids to foreign countries to acquire better education system. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is an increasingly trend that a large number of children go to study abroad to achieve benefits from better education systems. Although this phenomenon has several drawbacks, I hold the belief that it could be significantly beneficial.
It is true that studying overseas may exert negative impacts. In terms of individuals, students studying abroad face up to a number of problems. Being alone in a foreign country, they not only have to deal with homesick but also the fear of maturing and being independent. In addition, without parental guidance on a timely basis, the young can be misoriented and easily forget about their purpose when learning in a completely strange environment. From the society perspective, many young children going study abroad do not come back to their hometowns after graduating due to the higher quality of life and the better chance of career development. This may pose a threat to society, in particular, to the future workforce.
However, in my opinion, the merits of studying overseas are more noticeable. Going abroad is a unique opportunity for young generation to see the world by experiencing different cultures and customs as well as nature, helping them broadening their horizons. Furthermore, well-rounded education enables the young to acquire valuable knowledge, advanced techniques and innovative approaches. If these students go back to their countries and devote their lives to their nations , it will definitely a great breakthrough for the country's development.
In conclusion, in modern times parents have a tendency to send their children to developed countries to study. Even though there are downsides existing, I believe the upsides are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39776951673 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03192885678 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.218576045 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162338479377 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045516946584 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517293030394 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924079615954 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281149295083 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.