Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia what do you think the causes of this are? What can be done to improve the situation?
The role of science to uplift the standard of health is terrific in this modern context. However, some health concerns are still on the top of the table and anorexia is one of them. Many people have been reported with the symptoms of this health issue. This essay will examine the causes and remedies with relevant examples to restrain this worrying concern.
Numerous reasons can be put down behind this hiking phenomena. First and foremost, a huge transformation in the food culture plays a phenomenal role to make people victim of anorexia. To demonstrate, nowadays, most of edibles made of oi...
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Essay evaluation report
to make people victim of anorexia
to make people the victim of anorexia //when it is: A of B, need 'the A of B'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1594 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.125 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.567 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.368 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.451 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... health concerns are still on the top of the table and anorexia is one of them. M...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the edibles') or simply say ''most edibles''.
Suggestion: most of the edibles; most edibles
... of anorexia. To demonstrate, nowadays, most of edibles made of oil, spice and clarified butter...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...under the constant fear of being fatty. Most of people who have sedentary lifestyle are prone ...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n the passion of modern generation. Too much instructions regarding food habits make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27652733119 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66346266234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2829434217 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207531811346 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065026409956 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429997017185 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108662624652 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429726795166 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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