NOWADAYS MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT CHILDREN SHOULD BE TAUGHT HISTORY IN SCHOOLS, HOWEVER, OTHERS ARGUE THAT CHILDREN SHOULD LEARN SUBJECTS THAT ARE MORE HELPFUL FOR MODERN EVERYDAY LIFE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
we cannot repudiate this certitude that in this globalization era, History is a guide to give an acumen about the remote time. Therefore, some masses postulate that the history subject must emphasize in the schools. Nevertheless, for the contemporary daily life the other subjects are highly rather considered by the others than history. Further, both the view pints have to be analyzed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, History thesis has a cardinal role to play for making the students understand about their culture and it helps to teach the pupils about their ancestor experienced as well as their contribution for the country’s ascendancy. However, History offers update of past events because of traditional subject, also, Pupils learn how to formulate arguments, compare and analyze sources, and learn about cultural differences and changes.
ON THE FLIP SIDE, LEARNING MODERN SUBJECTS SUCH AS SCIENCE, MANAGEMENT, MATHEMATICS, ACCOUNTING ARE UTMOST GOOD FOR DEVELOPING A BETTER CAREER.MODERN BUSINESSES NEED PROFESSIONALS WHO ARE DEXTEROUS IN A SCIENCE OR BUSINESS DOMAIN .FOR INSTANCE= HOSPITALS, AUTOMOBILES AGENCIES NEED DOCTORS AND MECHANICAL ENGINEERS.THEREFORE,FOR EARNING A LARGE SUMS OF MONEY AS WELL AS SNUGGLY LIFE THESE SUbJECTS SHOULD BE LEARNT INEVITABLY BY CHILDREN.
In conclusion, I vigorously confess that children should rather emphasize on both the subjects than any one subject because history is the essential part owing to bestow an acuity about the ancient time and the modern subjects are very adequate to make them able to survive in this antagonistic world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57723577236 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1412534226 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.043194484 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.5 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285238878779 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10943004545 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458096262005 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15804506368 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340248915554 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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